When revising and editing word choice, a writer should replace clichéd expressions with engaging phrases.
O confirm that the text's organizational structure is clear.
choose and narrow down the topic to write about.
ensure that the body of the text includes supporting details.

Confirm that the text's organizational structure is clear.

Explanation:

When revising word choice, you are trying to make your sentences' wording and structure clearer to the reader.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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