Hey please tell me if that is good enough or I can improve it I’ll give brainliest! My teachers have guided me like my parents and supported me like my friends, due to which they have a special place in my heart today. Thank you to all teachers for making me confident for life, Each teacher is very much entitled to love, respect, affection and respect. We all must recognise the importance of the presence of a teacher in our lives. . They have made us so capable, have created our character and have helped us to work towards our success. Our teachers have enabled us to identify things that are good for us.  

Hi I think you did a pretty good job on this, but as you know nothing is perfect!

I would recommend adding more transitions, ending it with something more special, use more advanced words than the basic ones, more parallelism and have a better intro but overall I think it's very lovely.

Also you could say something like "Today, I would like to thank all those incredible people who have helped me become who I am today and show my gratitude through this small essay/or whatever.

- the heat nearly killed them that first summer.

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."