Write a body paragraph for an explanatory essay that supports the claim and uses academic writing throughout. Your assignment should include the following elements:
Evidence from "The Chrysanthemums" to support the claim you were given
An objective tone, free of obvious opinions and bias, and a formal style
Effective use of language, such as parallel structure, varied phrases and clauses, and efficient adjustment of parts of speech
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.

Ask yourself these questions as you revise:
Did I support the claim provided in the introduction paragraph?
Is my evidence specific and relevant to the points I'm making?
Does my writing stay objective and formal in style?
Do I use correct parallel structure and a variety of clauses and phrases?
Is my writing direct and efficient?

Use this rubric to determine how well you're meeting the criteria for the assignment.

the answer is a.

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a dellusion is athing where your mind sees stuff

the metamorphosis is based on an evident father-son problem. this story shows, as a result of the unthinkable transformation of the son in an insect, the deformation and destruction of the individual caused by the authoritarian and hierarchical structures of the family. the narrative begins with the transformation into an insect of enormous proportions of the traveling salesman gregor samsa, a lonely, introverted and submissive, who keeps his family with his work. when he worked, he was appreciated by everyone, but, now that he can not work, he is despised, especially by his father, but this is going to be joined, painfully for the protagonist, first his mother and, finally, his own sister, grete, with whom he had held a special relationship of complicity and affection for many years.

condemned by a deep sense of responsibility, gregor fears the reaction that his frightful aspect will incite in his family. he feels guilty for not being able to continue being useful to the beings he maintained. his own family, however, is ashamed and runs away from him, and even tyrannizes and resists him. the father, of a severe and despotic character, humiliates him and treats him with great cruelty. all his attempts to escape from the confinement to which he is subjected in his own room fail before the hostile rejection of the beings that surround him. prisoner in his lair and unable to continue playing the only function of making money he had, finally chooses, with the consent of his parents and sister, to die of starvation. with this, he is freed from a servile and unhappy existence. the family appreciates gregor while he fulfills the interests. but when he is unable to continue earning money, it becomes a problem, a shame, and family relationships begin to become tense, until coexistence becomes impossible.