Dave received an A on his essay. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?
(A) The lines that make up an A were written on Dave’s essay at the top of his paper.

(B) Dave hoped to receive an A on his essay, and it turned out he did receive the A he wanted.
(C) When Dave’s essay was returned to him by Mrs. Capri, he saw an A written at the top.
(D) The crisp, sharp lines of an A were etched in thick blue marker at the top of Dave’s essay.

Read the excerpt from the iroquois constitution. all lords of the five nations confederacy must be honest in all things. . it shall be a serious wrong for anyone to lead a lord into trivial affairs, for the people must ever hold their lords high in estimation out of respect to their honorable positions. what is the main idea of this excerpt? members of the five nations confederacy should know how to show respect to their lords. the lords of the five nations confederacy hold high-ranking positions. the people of the five nations confederacy deserve respect and should be held in high esteem. the lords of the five nations confederacy should act honorably and be revered.