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Jellyfish have a negative impact on humans. According to Rosalind Fonem jellyfish do not have a brain, a heart, or blood but they are causing problems for many places. Because there is a drastic decline of the fish population, fish industries are losing millions of dollars everyday. Also in many places several power plants are getting shut down due to clogged pipes. This leads to thousands of people being without electricity. On Top of this fishermen were scared of the glowing lights of the jellyfish. They think it was a monster surrounding the ship—ready to ingest it and all the people onboard. Jellyfish are really harmful to humans because of their sting. The jellyfish body can inject people with venom. Most often they result in immediate pain and red, irritated marks on the skin. Some jellyfish stings may cause more whole-body illness.