Revise the sentence to state the meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.
a.
In our company there are wide-open opportunities for professional growth with a company that enjoys an enviable record for
stability in the dynamic atmosphere of aerospace technology.
In our company we offer stable opportunities for professional growth in the field of aerospace
technology.
b. If a person is looking for opportunities for professional growth in the field of aerospace technology,
our company provides a stable working environment.
C. Our company provides opportunities for professional growth and stability in the dynamic field of
aerospace technology.
d. none of these

tree and the cat in the tree

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?

the answer is b:   the american composer and singer bob dylan composed many songs, by which he is very famous and considered one of the mosts influencial artists of pop music. he was awarded the nobel prize in literature for his type of poetry. but the huge impact his songs had are due to both lyrics and music, without which the message would lose strength.