Judy asked sarah to help her edit the following paragraph. identify the correct example of EDITING “Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much to their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark made no sales and begin to worry if their business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase all the supplies needed to begin their first week. After a little advertisng and free samples, the shop is doing much better.”

A sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence

B Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly

C Sarah suggests to Judy that she have a solid thesis statement

D Sarah suggests to Judy that the paragraph should be coherent

* i typed everything word for word hence the spelling mistakes
pls answer asap i will give u a kiss on the head

April does not let things interrupt her goals, she just continues on until she gets what she wants. complete, run on or comma splice

What do the sketches of 9/11 victims in "portraits of grief" achieve?

Read the excerpt from "a defence of poetry.” poetry thus makes immortal all that is best and most beautiful in the world; it arrests the vanishing apparitions which haunt the interlunations of life, and veiling them, or in language or in form, sends them forth among mankind, bearing sweet news of kindred joy to those with whom their sisters abide—abide, because there is no portal of expression from the caverns of the spirit which they inhabit into the universe of things. poetry redeems from decay the visitations of the divinity in man. which details from the excerpt provide more information about shelley’s idea that poetry "makes immortal all that is best and most beautiful in the world”? check all that apply. arrests the vanishing apparitions which haunt the interlunations of life sends them forth among mankind, bearing sweet news to those with whom their sisters abide no portal of expression from the caverns of the spirit redeems from decay the visitations of the divinity in man