English, 13.10.2020 01:01, breanna7667

I would like some opinions on my poetry and any criticism Thanks
_let me know if you want to know the meaning behind these also__
Depth of darkness

For nothing is around me
I am isolated in darkness
As the fear surrounds me
I’m alone

I cannot see where once was light
I am in a hole of darkness and fear
The depth of the darkness is
Uncontrollable, Unbearable, Unstoppable...

Suddenly, the fear that once surrounded
Cracks, Crumbles, Breaks down...
As the brightness peers through
I see light

I climb to see the light
Trying to find the lost
Hoping that I will find joy
Then I see the light and know I’ve found the lost
Hope, Joy, Happiness

What lies below
For the sea is deep
And tide runs low
The wonder of the ocean below

If you may wonder what is below
Most people will never know
What truly is below

Even the deepest part of the ocean is
Still a wonder
That you may keep wondering

But will never find the truth
No matter the depth
No matter the darkness
There will not always be an answer to everything
Yet are you still wondering?

Lost

I am lost
Not knowing where I am
Looking, searching, wondering
Where am I?

I cannot see
I am searching
For the lost

Hoping one day
I will remember
The happiness
I once had

It may come back
But it may be lost
The happiness I once felt is
Somewhere

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