2. To die, to sleep- No more-and by a sleep to say we end
The heartache and the thousand natural shocks
That flesh is heir to- tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wished.

that's pretty good but the second time you said Asleep you wrote a sleep

idk

explanation:

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it