Quindlen uses many different types of evidence throughout the argument to support her claim, for example, facts, statistics, and quotations.
Identity at least three examples of evidence and evaluate how she uses each
one to support her claim.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.