How did the author organize events in "The Oasis: Africa"?

For english i have to find 4 errors in each diary post

How does the map develop the central idea that scholars at jundi shapur spread the knowledge of sugar? the map illustrates the spread of sugar from new guinea to persia. the map shows that sugar was being refined primarily in the north rather than the south. the map illustrates the spread of knowledge about refined sugar processing to egypt. the map illustrates that people in china knew how to refine sugar and shared this knowledge. the answer is c

Correct the grammatical errors? "is it just me or are there more weird things happening in the news lately? "