Need help fast Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.
Which is the best revision of sentence 5?
1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a
community garden. 2. We were walking home from
school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and
stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4.1
thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the
dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with
a shovel
We were walking by the dirt lot again, and there was
Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.
The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot
again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a
shovel
o I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was he
digging up the dirt with a shovel.
O Finally, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there
was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

The correct answer is The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot  again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a  shovel.

Explanation:

In this passage, the narrator describes experiences related to the creation of a community garden. In sentence 5, the author describes what seems to be the beginning of community garden "I was walking by the dirt lot  again, and there was Ben digging up..."; however, this sentence does not show the relationship between this event and the events previously described.

In this context, it is necessary to add a time relationship or at least a connector that shows how Been acting strangely led to him began working to create a garden. According to this, the best option is "The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt..." because this clearly shows this last event occurred after Ben decided the dirt lot was a perfect place to create a community garden.

The correct answer is B:The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot

again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a

shovel.

Explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

i believe it is the first choice (1.)

because the major theme is(“both the wild and civilization have rules.”)

and also as u said,( based on what buck learns within the call of the wild, "both the wild and civilization have rules".this is true of humans within society as well.