Antietam was the most devastating one-day battle of the Civil War. A victory for the South could have been the turning point of the war. While neither of the armies would in the end be victorious in this battle, Antietam would be a major success for the Union. Which would be the best way to improve the quality of writing? Rearrange the sequence of ideas. Vary the sentence length. Redefine the purpose. Replace the be verbs with action verbs.

    prior to dee leaving home, the everyday objects in her household were just that- everyday objects. she took no special notice of any of them. however, once she returns home, all of these objects represent great culture significance to her. she is incredibly enthused about how great the wooden benches and old quilts are because she thinks it is in-style to be in touch with her own culture.

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do you have part b? ?

explanation:

not sure but i think it’s the snug nest