If you were the instructor, what would you change in this collaboration experience?

What is wong with this sentence cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?

For the book you are reading, write a paragraph of five to six sentences summarizing what you have read so far. what are your predictions about the story? use proper spelling and grammar. i'm reading hiroshima. respond fast