Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase?
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be
in a logical order.
Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to
make the story come alive.
Henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point
of view consistent
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make the
sequence clearer.

Hurry 20 mins all the animals were now present except moses, the tame raven, who slept on a perch behind the back door. when major saw that they had all made themselves comfortable and were waiting attentively he cleared his throat and began: "comrades, you have heard already about the strange dream that i had last night. but i will come to the dream later. i have something else to say first. i do not think, comrades, that i shall be with you for many months longer, and before i die i feel it my duty to pass on to you such wisdom as i have acquired. i have had a long life, i have had much time for thought as i lay alone in my stall, and i think i may say that i understand the nature of life on this earth as well as any animal now living. it is about this that i wish to speak to you." which historical figure does old major most likely represent? tsar nicholas ii an imperial guard vladimir lenin joseph stalin