Anita is editing her draft essay about a lion sanctuary she visited. She frowns at the following sentences: "There were about 20 lions in the sanctuary. A lot of workers would take care of them. Sometimes, a few lions would try to escape."
Anita needs to edit her sentences for .

redundancy

grammatical errors

vague language

connotation

grammatical errors

Explanation:

Grammatical error is a term used in prescriptive grammar to describe an instance of faulty, unconventional, or controversial usage, such as a misplaced modifier or an inappropriate verb tense. Also called a usage error. Compare grammatical error with correctness.

breathe, think and analyze the situation, pull them aside and talk to them about it

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