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How to Do a Cartwheel
One of the simplest gymnastic tricks is the cartwheel.
When you do a cartwheel, you go upside down, but never
really leave the ground!
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Here is a simple method to learn how to do a cartwheel.
First, prepare. You need to wear comfortable athletic
clothing that you won't trip over. I suggest bare feet so
you don't slip. Have a soft surface like a mat, and always
have a spotter. A spotter is someone who looks after your
safety, and catches you if you are about to fall.
Now you are ready to begin. Stand with legs shoulder-
width apart and arms extended horizontally. Lift your left
foot and then bring it down to the floor. This will give you
momentum. Bend slightly and put your left hand on the
floor, then put your right hand next to your left hand on
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