... has led many to wonder if being a vegan is both healthy and sustainable for the long term.

"Vegans get 100% of their daily protein needs from such

foods as soy derivatives, bulgur wheat, lentils, nuts, and

beans," says Mikel Rollah, director of Veganism Now! Many

opponents of veganism claim that the vegan diet lacks

protein, but this is simply not true.

What is wrong with the quotation in this example?

The quote comes at the beginning of the paragraph.

Explanation:

The quote came at the beginning of the paragraph and as a result gave no direction as to what it was explaining.

The quote is meant to give evidence that indeed Vegans can get their protein needs from vegan diets as opposed to what people believe making it a supporting statement.

As a Supporting statement therefore, it should come after the main point has been made that many opponents claim that Vegan diets are lacking in proteins.

its everything except for telling nonfiction and using first person

the use of “as” in the example to draw the resemblance. some more examples of common similes are given below. common examples of simile. our soldiers are as brave as lions. her cheeks are red like a rose. he is as funny as a monkey. the water well was as dry as a bone. he is as cunning as a fox. simile introduces vividness into what we say.