What conclusion can you draw from visualizing this scene?
General Zaroff does not care what Rainsford thinks.
Highlight descriptive details that help you visualize.
"Civilized? And you shoot down men?"
A trace of anger was in the general's black eyes, but it was
there for but a second; and he said, in his most pleasant
manner, "Dear me, what a righteous young man you are!
I assure you I do not do the thing you suggest. That
would be barbarous. I treat these visitors with every
consideration."
"The Most Dangerous Game,"
Richard Connell
General Zaroff is offended by Rainsford.
General Zaroff wants to intimidate Rainsford.

general Zaroff if offended by Rainsford

Explanation:

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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