Steve Gadd is known as one of the most influential drummers of all time, and he toured with Eric Clapton. What is wrong with the sentence? The ideas are not coordinate. It lacks parallel structure. A semicolon should precede the coordinate adverb. It has excessive coordination.

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in my opinion i think it was not excessive at all. the maids turned against the queen in his absence, how could he ever trust them again? if he let them go they would surely spread the news of the suitor's deaths, which is much too risky. as for the suitors, they were selfish, rude, and greedy. the god's had apparently marked them for death, meaning odysseus made their death come faster.