Write an original fable of no less than 125 words about pride. Use animal characters in your fable. Write a moral at the end of the fable. Reading some different fables will help you in writing your own.

One day their was a crow the crow had a lot of pride but was very vain, one good evening the crow had come apon a farmer the farmer admired the crow so he gave the crow a huge meal. When the crow went back into the forest he started talking to all the other animals telling them that he was the most beautiful bird in all of the land as he was talking all the food he was holding in his beak fell out and a fox took it and ran off. the end

Moral:

Don't be too vain about yourself.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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