Which steps can you take to improve flow in your
essay?

Check the four best choices,

1)add transitions

2)vary sentence structure

3)change you to I

4)combine related sentences

5)include descriptions

6)make sentences a similar length

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Add Transitions, Vary Sentence Structure, Combine Related Sentences, and Include Descriptions

Explanation: Correct on e d g e n u i t y

i think its add transitions

Explanation:

When you add transition words to the beginning of your next paragraph, as long as its a proper transition word, it creates a clean flow to the next point in your essay

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.