This is one of my body paragraphs to an essay. and i have to do all 4 of these things to revise it.
1. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
2. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
3. Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
4. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.

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To begin with, jellyfish are multiplying by thousands on the daily. Jellyfish can release 40,000 eggs daily. This causes there to be swarms of jellyfish, which can eventually become blooms. In the passage “jellyfish take over” it states “In the Black Sea, blooms of Mnemiopsis jellyfish are responsible for millions of dollars in losses for the local fishery industries who catch and sell anchovies” This means that because there are swarms and blooms of jellyfish all over the world, its causing the local fishers industries to lose money because of all the jellyfish. For example, if you are running a business, and there is something that is keeping you from being able to make money, you will end up losing money because you won't have anything to sell. In the text “jellyfish take over” it states, “Some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily! It’s no wonder that these swarms could turn into blooms.” to elaborate, that more and more jellyfish are being produced daily, and they are all staying attached to each other and traveling in swarms and becoming blooms that can affect the environment. And not in a good way.

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kennedy creates personal credibility by saying he is more than fit to lead. he talks about the sixty day period that he constructed administration, and says based on that he will be an acceptable leader.

jfk has a great reputation as an american citizen. he fought in wwii, and earned the navy and marine corps medal. he saved several men on his pt-109 patrol torpedo boat after an attack by the japanese navy. he also served in congress for the 11th congressional district for massachusetts, and served three terms in the house of representatives.

explanation:

the speech this question is referring to is president kennedy's special message to the congress on urgent national needs, may 25, 1961

kennedy responds in a very direct and concrete way to those thinking that communism is a positive system:

"yet their aggression is more often concealed than open. they have fired no missiles; and their troops are seldom seen. they send arms, agitators, aid, technicians and propaganda to every troubled area. but where fighting is required, it is usually done by others--by guerrillas striking at night, by assassins striking alone--assassins who have taken the lives of four thousand civil officers in the last twelve months in vietnam alone--by subversives and saboteurs and insurrectionists, who in some cases control whole areas inside of independent nations." (kennedy)

president kennedy presents communism as cowardly, as a hidden and treacherous weapon that strikes from the shadows like thieves, he represents the system as not even being capable of showing and open and overt attack or confrontation. to finish up the response, he expresses that the system attacks even a country's idependence and freedom.