Is this paragraph grammatically correct?

One of my favorite movies is 50 first dates, I never get tired of watched it. It is a really
funny and interesting movie, especially because was filmed in Hawaii, a country that some day I would like to go.

No, not exactly.

Explanation: You could reformat it like so:

One of my favorite movies is 50 First Dates; I never get tired of watching it. It is a really funny and interesting movie, especially because it was filmed in Hawaii, a country I would someday like to go to.

Grammar Notes:

- You need to italicize and properly capitalize movie titles (like 50 First Dates).

- Independent clauses should be joined with a semicolon (like in the first sentence).

- Always include direct objects (you forgot the it before was in the second sentence).

he chooses to climb mount everest and decided not to any more due to the 1,000s of people making a line on the mountion

explanation:

in 1636, roger williams settled at the tip of narragansett bay after being banished from the massachusetts bay colony for his religious views, on land granted to him by the narragansett tribe. he called the site "providence plantation" and declared it a place of religious freedom.

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