Which revision corrects the inappropriate shift in verb mood?
Have you ever tried kayaking? You could explore local
streams and lakes. Or you could take your kayak out on the
open ocean. You are paddling along with the breeze in your
hair. You might want to do some fishing from your kayak.
One thing is for sure: You wouldn't want to forget your
flotation device!
A. You paddled along with the breeze in your hair.
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B. You would paddle along with the breeze in your hair.
O
C. Is the breeze blowing your hair while you paddle?
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D. Paddling along, you feel the breeze in your hair.