I write poems would love for feedback.
Please dont steal them i put hours into them.

When the flowers bloom and when the sun began to rise. I will be here in your arms watching you smile or soothing your cries. How the time has passed and the days have gone by. through the good and the bad, you're still by my side. Oh, what a pair of partners and crime. I feel your skin gently against mine. oh, what a sight. My, oh my aren't you fine. We have our moments where our thoughts and feelings don't align. But even though the storms and the lows. We end up falling and rising high. Sometimes I wish I could do more in our efforts combined. To create something so beautiful that it can't be forgotten or left behind. When you kiss me with those lips. we have yet to say the words of love and declare it to god up above. Maybe with my voice of love, you'll fall in love and see this is not an error. where my dreams become yours and your dreams become mine. where we support one and another and we are one of a kind. let the world see how united we are. We will forever move forward. And stand our ground. Oh yes, we will truly go far.

Read the excerpt from the war of the worlds, in which the crowd begins to disperse just before the first martian exits the cylinder. when i returned to the common the sun was setting. scattered groups were hurrying from the direction of woking, and one or two persons were returning. the crowd about the pit had increased, and stood out black against the lemon yellow of the sky—a couple of hundred people, perhaps. there were raised voices, and some sort of struggle appeared to be going on about the pit. strange imaginings passed through my mind. as i drew nearer i heard stent's voice: "keep back! keep back! "a boy came running towards me."it's a-movin'," he said to me as he passed; 'a-screwin' and a-screwin' out. i don't like it. i'm a-goin' 'ome, i am."what options accurately depict the impact of the boy's words on pacing within the excerpt? (select all that apply.)the war of the worldsthe setting is in england, so the boy's words provide the reader with the dialect of the area. even though that slows down the plot, the boy's words contain important information. the plot's forward movement is slow at the beginning of the excerpt because there is little action. the boy's words increase the tension and counteract that lag. the narrator is not close enough to see clearly into the pit, so the boy's words provide the narrator with the information he needs, which moves the plot forward. the boy's words serve to speed up the pacing of the plot because, as he is talking to the narrator, he is running past him to get away. the narrator is not close enough to see clearly into the pit, so the boy's words provide the narrator with the information he needs, which moves the plot forward. wrong? the boy's words serve to speed up the pacing of the plot because, as he is talking to the narrator, he is running past him to get away.