Anyway that test made me feel worser than all the others because they' did it over 10 times with different amazeds and Algernon won every time. I dint know that mice were so smart, Maybe thats because Algernon is a white mouse. Maybe white mice are smarter than other mice.

What does the reader know that Charlie doesn’t?

Algernon has been trained to find his food in the mazes.
Charlie has more difficult mazes than Algernon does.
Algernon does not actually beat Charlie in the maze tests.
Charlie cannot beat Algernon because he’s upset.

Hyperbole in the book messenger by lois lowry

Read the excerpt from the dark game: true spy stories from invisible ink to cia moles. yet, by the time robert e. lee surrendered to ulysses grant at appomattox, virginia, some four years later, about 620,000 soldiers had died on the battlefields, more than american battle deaths in all other wars from the revolution through the vietnam war. what is the author’s primary purpose for including this detail? to inform readers about the differences between three military conflicts to persuade readers of the seriousness of the american civil war to entertain readers with tales from behind the lines of battle to encourage readers to visit battlegrounds in appomattox, virginia

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?