Write the introduction of a suspenseful scary story, using ONE of the story starters below!

- On a blustery, autumn evening three friends walked home from school through the graveyard that bordered their neighborhood.

- I heard a scream from the bedroom window, when I looked up from the yard, I saw my mother pointing behind me.

- I awoke suddenly, sitting straight up in bed, covered in sweat. Looking around as my eyes adjusted, I knew something was wrong.

b)metaphor

explanation:

when reading the sentence carefully it says,"hope is a thing with feathers" it's like saying: hope is a thing like feathers

get what i'm saying? instead of using a smilie like or as they use "with"

it would be nice enough if i got .

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.