Bianka walked onto the stage to play in the piano recital.

Which revision should the writer make to emphasize how Bianka was feeling?

A) Bianka nervously walked onto the stage to play in her first piano recital.
B) When it was her turn, Bianka walked onto the stage to play in her first piano recital.
C) Bianka walked onto the auditorium stage to play in the piano recital.
D) Bianka walked onto the stage to play in the piano recital for the first time.

Your answer would be A

The reason it would be A is because the rest of the answers tell what she did and there was no emotion in Bianca's addutitue.

Nervous is an adj. and it tells you how she is feeling.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)