Instruction
Active
Identifying the Writer's Reactions
How does the narrator react to being in the soccer
game?
It was mid-game and I felt energized. I saw the ball
making its way toward me and went in for it. Richard
Neeland had the ball. I ran up and kicked it through his
legs. A surge of adrenaline ran through me.
- "I'm Not Thirteen Yet,"
Amy Bernstein
She gets tired.
She gets worried.
She gets nervous.
She gets excited

i think the answer is invented words, rhyming knack, alliteration, and, metaphor.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.