Excerpt from The Story of an Hour
Kate Chopin

She wept at once, with sudden, wild abandonment, in her sister's arms.
Which is the BEST revision of this sentence from Section 2?

A) No revision is needed.
B) She wept at once with sudden wild abandonment in her sister's arms.
C) She wept at once with sudden, wild abandonment in her sister's arms.
D) She wept at once with sudden wild abandonment, in her sister's arms.

Read the following short excerpt of student writing. use your vocabulary and grammar knowledge to determine which suggestions you would make to improve his or her grammar and word choice. i really thought she loved me but i discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. it was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. i was confused by the text because it said, "don't tell mike." i felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. at first i felt very angry bitter and hateful but then i felt so hopeless and depressed. i longed for her to call me. i thought if i could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then i would not be filled with such bitterness. instead of calling her i talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. talking with her makes me feel euphoric. i think i may be on the road to recovery. what word would you suggest to replace the underlined word or words in this excerpt? instead of calling her, i talked to another friend who is (good at listening and feeling my pain). talking with her makes me feel euphoric. amorous sentimental empathetic grave

Which sentence is written correctly? chicken a lean protein, can by prepared, in manyh chicken a lean protein can be prepared, in many he chicken, a lean protein, can be prepared in many he chicken, a lean, protein can be prepared in-sany he

They also make slight swaying movements to mimic leaves and grass moved by the wind. based on the text, to mimic is most likely which of the following? avoid copy make mock