Judy asked Sarah to help her revise the following paragraph. Identify the correct example of revising.

Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark have made no sales and begin to worry if their business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase all the supplies needed to begin their first week .. After a little advertisng and free samples , the shop is doing much better.
A. Sarah corrects the spelling of coffee in the first sentence
B. Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly
C. Sarah adds a period between the words one and with
D. Sarah corrects the punctuation of elm street

Which major world event was near the birth of the modernist movement

Read the excerpt from "home front diary." jimmy simmons stopped by today to tell me that he had enlisted in the army. he asked me if i would write to him, and i said i would. i told him that i've been writing to my uncle arthur and susan's cousin john for about a year, and as an experienced correspondent i had some advice about all the censorship. "don't write down any information about your location or the number of soldiers in your unit because the censors will cut all of that away," i said. "in my experience, loose lips not only sink ships, they make letters look like snowflake decorations! ” well, he belly laughed over that one. how is the author's perspective different from jimmy's? the author has been to war and she can give jimmy advice. jimmy has become a soldier and does not believe the author’s advice. the author has experience writing to soldiers but jimmy does not. jimmy has more experience at letter writing than the author.

7. read the sentence. i have tried hard to get good photographs of my friends. which word is the adverb? a. good b. hard c. friends d. tried 7 of 10