The writer is considering changing the method of development used in sentences 4 and 5 (reproduced below) to provide a clearer line of reasoning for the audience.

The discovery was remarkable not only because of the cheese’s age and well-preserved state, but because of a new protein analysis performed on the cheese by chemist Enrico Greco at the University of Catania in Italy. This cutting-edge analysis allowed Dr. Greco to unlock the cheese’s contents and reveal new insights into life in ancient Egypt.

Should the writer use a different method of development in sentences 4 and 5 ?

yes the first one is correct .

i believe it may be the hope this sorry if i'm wrong.

one thousand and one nights, also known as arabian nights is a collection of stories whose basic structure is that of embedded narrative. this technique refers to a main story which works as the common frame - or framing narrative - for the other stories, and then this series of stories which are connected to the main one. this technique can also be referred to as a story within a story. the stories stem from the original tale, some begin and end on their own, some are connected to the previous or following one, by means of questions that are answered in the subsequent tale, or characters which reappear.

answer: they were written as a long tale

explanation:

i googled it.