Can someone please help me edit this paragraph and write a better conclusion. :))

To become an investor, a person must avoid becoming a lifestyle creep and understand the techniques used to save with little money. A lifestyle creep means “as you make more money, what once seemed like luxuries become necessities”(Goldman, “Investing 101: Investing Basics for Beginners +++). If you spend most of your money on things that are not necessities you will not have any money left over to invest. To avoid becoming a lifestyle creep, as you make more money, make sure you think about if things are necessities before buying them. In addition to not becoming a lifestyle creep, there are many techniques used to save with little money. For example, you should try using a spare change app. A spare change app will “round-up your purchases, allowing you to invest small amounts of money that you’d hardly miss.” This is very useful because the money you invest will add up other time. By using techniques to invest with little money and avoiding becoming a lifestyle creep, you can become an investor.

Well first of all i think you need to add an excerpt from the story or passage. i think it might be d though.

here here are the quiz answers thats all i can do hope i was able to =]    

i see some of you tried the true/false quiz of what was real and what was made up in little women. no one got 100% but you were very close! here are the answers:

hannah the servant  false– the alcotts could not afford any servants in those daysthe christmas play (“the witches’ curse, an operatic tragedy)  true  – this play is actually a composite of actual plays written and performed by louisa and anna.amy burns jo’s manuscript  falsemarmee’s temper  trueamy falling through the ice  falsejo pinching meg’s papered locks before the ball  falsemeg being dressed up as a doll at annie moffat’s  falseamy bewailing her pickled limes  truebeth receiving the piano from mr. lawrence  true  – in harriet reisen’s book louisa may alcott the woman behind little women, lizzie received a piano as a gift in walpole, nh when she was twenty from dr. henry whitney bellows (see chapter 9 in the book)mr. march’s illness  false  – louisa was writing about her own illness her civil war nursing stintjo sells her hair.  false  but it was based on something true, that louisa had all her hair cut off during her illness after the civil warbeth wasted away and died peacefully.  false  lizzie (aka beth) did waste away but she was in tremendous pain, was often quite anxious, and even went through a spell where she rejected her family and wanted to be left alone (anna said in a letter that lizzie had called her “horrid.”)jo published her first story, “the rival painters.”  trueamy writes her own will.  true?   not sure on this one (i know, i shouldn’t have included it if i didn’t know the answer! )jo rejects laurie’s love.  false