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The writing style is exciting, and the author
uses precise words.
I was hiking on a crisp, clear autumn morning
when a snake came slithering toward me. "It's
probably just a garter Snake," I thought. As
the snake slithered nearer, I spotted a rattle
at the tip of its tail. I jumped back with a gasp.
The Snake was poisonous!
The passage includes sensory details, such
as what the narrator saw and heard.
The passage makes it easy to decide how the
narrator felt during the event.
The event is told in a reasonable sequence.
DONE
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