Please help me correct this worksheet. (THIS IS DUE TOMORROW)

On #11 you should take out  ¨It was really cool¨ because that is an opinion because maybe some people won think its  cool. You should say "When the Boston Red Sox won the world series in 2004, they beat the highly paid New York Yankees and showed New York Yankees owner that money isn't everything. you got number 1-10 right.  You need to add space to #12 because then your teacher won't understand what your writing. On #13 you wrote they live on the islands of indonesia but in the paragraph above it says that they live in the tropical rainforest of Sumatra. On #14 you should write out everything he did because then if you were summarizing what that paragraph was and you just wrote he made many paintingś your not giving the facts about him. Your welcome, hope this helps

Explanation:

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.