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English, 14.03.2020 21:58, dearydn22

Read the passage.

His kite went into electrical wires. A spark of electricity lit the kite. Pieces of burning kite drifted into nearby trees, starting a forest fire.

Which revision is needed for this passage?

a. Put the second sentence at the end.

b. Use the verbs “flew” and “ignited” instead of “went” and “lit.”

c. Clarify the main idea in the third sentence.

d. Eliminate the third sentence.

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