Review the sample response. Which changes did you

suggest in your response? Check all that apply.

A.)The coordinate adjectives hot and dry should be

separated by a comma.

B.)August should be capitalized.

C.)Summer and north should not be capitalized.

D.)There should be a serial comma in the list.

E.)A pair of commas should separate the phrase which

I love from the rest of the sentence.

B and C

Explanation:

It was a hot dry day last august when I realized that I was tired of Summer. On that day I came to the conclusion that Summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. I decided to get in my car and drive North to the mountains for some cool air which I love and shady trees. It was the best decision I made all Summer.

*Seasons, such as winter, spring, summer and fall, do not require capitalization because they are generic common nouns.

*Seasons as Generic Nouns This can make some intuitive sense, as you capitalize the days of the week (e.g., Wednesday) and the months of the year (e.g., August). However, the four seasons are not proper nouns and, consequently, do not need to be capitalized.

where exactly is the sentence

the narrator is a first person, participant one, who describes in the simple past tense important and difficult events in his earlier life. he also provides temporal markers as the month (january) and the time (12: 30 pm). finally the account of his experience is very detailed, to the extent that a participant narrator would talk the same way about his experiences. a good example of such detail is the mention of the “bovril ration” which historically was a native american food adopted by european explorers in arctic and antarctic regions due to its high level of calories.