![English](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
English, 07.03.2020 03:16, mahmudabiazp3ekot
Rewrite the following paragraph to improve its unity and coherence. As you do this, consider the following:
Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence?
Do all of the details logically support the topic sentence?
Does the paragraph have adequate transitions to make connections between sentences clear?
Is another sentence needed here or there to explain or develop a vague idea? Do not hesitate to add to the paragraph, if necessary!
Are any of the details irrelevant to the main idea of the paragraph?
Are any ideas repeated unnecessarily?
My eight-year-old brother is a pest. He is eight years old. He has black hair. He is not the average size for an eight year old. He is short for his age. He gets up early on Saturday mornings and wakes everyone up because the cartoons are on. On weekdays, we have to make him get up to get ready for school. He always waits until the last minute to put on his clothes. When he doesn't get his way, he whines until he gets it. He is a spoiled little brat. He always gets his way with our parents. This is the little boy that I have to put up with everyday.
![answer](/tpl/images/cats/otvet.png)
Answers: 1
Other questions on the subject: English
![image](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
English, 21.06.2019 13:40, cchsemily7210
Which statement best explains coelho's choice in the alchemist to have the boy work for the crystal merchant? it shows the reader what happens when one follows his or her personal legendit explains how the boy earns enough money to marry the merchant's daughter. it provides the reader with engaging details about the city of tangier. it demonstrates that the path to one's personal legend is not a straight and obvious one.
Answers: 3
![image](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
English, 21.06.2019 17:40, lillianesagoff7411
Which revision of the sentence most effectively incorporates the literary term characterized?
Answers: 1
![image](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
English, 21.06.2019 20:30, Reese8693
Hurry i'll give 20 pts and a to whoever will comment first hurry no coying compares how both dickinson and shelley use form - lines, capitalization, and punctuation - to bring meaning to the poems "will there really be a 'morning'? ", "i dwell in possibility", and "ozymandias".
Answers: 1
Do you know the correct answer?
Rewrite the following paragraph to improve its unity and coherence. As you do this, consider the fol...
Questions in other subjects:
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
Mathematics, 10.09.2021 03:40
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/himiya.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/istoriya.png)
History, 10.09.2021 03:40
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
Mathematics, 10.09.2021 03:40
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/mat.png)
![Konu](/tpl/images/cats/en.png)
English, 10.09.2021 03:40