Can someone look over my letter and help me fix it and reword it different please and thank you. If more information needs added please add it. And if you could write it out to make it sound better I would appreciate all your help. (Instructions) Your Persuasive speech, letter, or essay should be 3-4 paragraphs. Make sure you have included: 1) An attentionattention-getting hook, 2) A clearly stated claim, 3) Logical reasons with supporting evidence, 4) A conclusion that sums up your argument and includes a call to action, 4) A tone and voice appropriate for your audience, 5) A clear and purposeful pattern of organization with transitions, 6) Correct spelling, grammar, and mechanics. ( I extremely need help with this. Please be honest with your response) Will Mark Brainliest.