To all the people in the word, i may not be the4 smallest i may not be the tallest, but im me and im meduim.
but out of all the voices in the world mine may be thre smallest but my small open mind can reach up and touch the sky. and if i stand on my toes i might just reach the world and so will my words, so under the black sky aqnd summer breeze here i be standing under the tree!
what do you think this is for a assigment is it good?

This sounds good but you have some spelling errors

Explanation:

i would say c, admiration because the narrator related to the main character and she, too, once felt ashamed about her culture and wished to be an american girl to impress a boy. she felt admiration because her mom prepared her favorite foods when her and robert's (the guy she liked) family all came together and had a family reunion.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.