Which sentence has the most traditional syntax

A. The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, hearing circled a pale finger

B. The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger

C. Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger

D. With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger

B. The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger

Explanation:

B. The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger

Since the question is asked about most traditional syntax, this is to be noticed that in sentences syntax; it should first have the subject, then the verb  and after that the object or other element which elaborate the the verb to seek the idea of the sentence.