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English, 17.01.2020 06:31, taibamah

7(02.0s mc)
read this paragraph from a news story:
the annual sk shelter buddies fun run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding adopting families for all animals brought to or left at the shelter
which revision best eliminates wordiness in the paragraph while maintaining meaning? (3 points)

a. the sk shelter buddies fun run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third year in a row for finding adopting families for all animals brought to or left at the shelter.

b. the annual sk shelter buddies fun run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year in a row for finding adopting families for all animals at the shelter.

c. the sk shelter buddies fun run was held again to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third year for finding adopting families for all animals brought to the shelter.

d. the annual sk shelter buddies fun run was held again this year to raise funds for the county animal shelter, which is marking its third straight year for finding adopting families for all shelter animals

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