Which comments are examples of constructive feedback?
a) don't use dialogue when you write. it's childish.
b if you summarized the go-kart story instead, you could get to the real conflict sooner.
c) when using dialogue, you don't always need to write "he said" and "she said." the context can often indicate who is talking.
d) this essay is ok, but it doesn't have any action. chess tournaments are boring, so i don't think anyone will want to read this.

As you have learned, epic heroes experience trials along their journeys. using your knowledge from beowulf, create a trial you believe an epic hero like beowulf might face. you will need to write a description of the trial using the aspects of a narrative. the trial can be anything you imagine, meaning you can test the hero in any way you see fit. be creative and have fun with this! let your creativity flow. focus on key attributes of beowulf and use his attributes to create a trial that would truly test him. since beowulf is very strong, a trial involving strength and endurance might be to easy. try thinking outside the box to create a trial that would truly test the hero of the geats. examples of beowulf’s attributes: couragous, loyal, strong, persistant, honorable, confident try to use one or multiples of these attribute when designing your trial. a good way to think of this activity is that you are a hunger games game designer. what could you make that would stump beowulf

2pointsread this passage: "don't worry about me," i said. "i'm not tired at all." oh no, i'm feeling dizzy. this is what they call passing out. don'tdo that. don't pass out. stay upright – stay awake. how does the difference between the character's spoken words and internalthoughts affect the story? oa. it establishes the setting. ob. it introduces a new character. c. it creates dramatic tension. d. it ties up loose ends.

Read the passage. macduff. hail, king! for so thou art: behold, where stands th’ usurper’s cursèd head. the time is free. i see thee compassed with thy kingdom’s pearl, that speak my salutation in their minds, whose voices i desire aloud with mine: hail, king of scotland! what is the main idea of this passage from act v of the tragedy of macbeth by william shakespeare? macduff is hailing macbeth as the rightful king of scotland. macduff anticipates that he will be king. macduff anticipates that king duncan will be king. macduff is acknowledging that macbeth is a traitor to the throne.