Write a thesis statement for your argument on rising the legal driving age.

Argument on rising the legal driving age.-

"The average annual rate quoted for a teen driver in the United States is $2,267 as of 2017. Even adding one driver to an existing policy adds more than $600 to the cost of coverage on your vehicles. "

As the number speaks for itself, State has shown that 15% of all accident death on the roads of the UK involve drivers under the age of 21 years. Research has shown that 17 to 20 years old are more likely to get injured in the accident.

Young people include the children and college-going students who may have a 'racer boy attitude' while driving causing fatal injuries and accidents.

Raising the driving age limit may help reduce the fatal accidents that occur with the teens on the roads. This could also help in reducing congestion and jam on the roads.

There are countries like India where the age limit of getting a driving license is 18 years.

hence, Raising the legal minimum age limit will decrease the road accidents caused by the reckless driving of an inexperienced driver.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

did you ever figure it out?