Sentence improvement: from the drop-down list, identify the error in each
sentence.

although shelby finished her project on time, she was very tired.

a. subordination
b. unity
c. parallelism
d. dangling modifier
e. misplaced modifier
f. logical construction

The error in sentence is Misplaced Modifier.

Explanation:

The correct sentence will be Although Shelby was very tired , she finished her project on time.

There are different parts of sentence in which grammatical mistakes can be done. They are:

Subordination: These express relationships clearly and the emphasis is carried out properly.They are used to describe time, purpose, cause and condition. Hence they make use of words like after, before, whenever,because, since, as, that, so that, in order that, if, even though, unless.

Parallelism: To demonstrate a similar level of importance, consistent word patterns and endings are used.

Misplaced Modifier: A modifier is placed somewhere in a sentence where the intended meaning is messed up.

Dangling modifier: it changes the meaning of sentence and cannot be identified.

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the answers are:

1. dolores driscoll - b. first person minor

dolores is a minor character who happens to be driving the bus at the time of the accident. she narrates picking up each of the children and her last memory is the children being thrown around the bus.

2. billy ansel - a. first person major

billy loses his twins in the accident. he tells his own story, how he witnessed the accident and how he tried to the rescuers. he is a major character, as he is at the center of the story.

3. mitchell stephens - c. first person observer

mitchell enters the story after the accident. he is a lawyer who learns about the accident based on other characters observations. though he tells the story from a first person perspective, he is just an observer.

as for matcthing the message or lesson posted with the person who said them:

1."obviously, you can't control everything, but you are obliged to take care of the few things you can. i'm an optimist basically who acts like a pessimist. on principle. just in case." - dolores driscoll

2. "i could no longer believe even in life. . for me now the only reality was death." - billy ansel