Rachel is making predictions about the odyssey as she reads this excerpt.

so she described it, sitting in her chamber
among her maids—while her true lord was eating.
then she called in the forester and said:

“go to that man on my behalf, eumaeus,
and send him here, so i can greet and question him.
abroad in the great world, he may have heard
rumors about odysseus—may have known him! ”

rachel makes the prediction that penelope will discover the stranger’s true identity. which detail best supports her prediction?

he may have heard/ rumors about odysseus
sitting in her chamber/ among her maids
then she called in the forester
abroad in the great world

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

this labor, by slow prudence to make mild.   c. ability to govern well

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.