During research, you read the following passage on a website:

although a cone snail looks beautiful, it is very deadly. it uses a harpoon-like tooth to paralyze its prey and then swallow it whole. it can even change its poison depending on the animal it is attacking.

you write the following passage in your informational article:

the cone snail can change its poison depending on the animal it attacks. after paralyzing its prey with a harpoon-like tooth, it swallows it whole. although it is very deadly, it looks beautiful.

which choice best describes what you wrote?

it is a strong example of paraphrasing. it successfully rephrases the main idea in a new way.
it is not a strong example of paraphrasing. it changes the meaning of the original passage.
it is not a strong example of paraphrasing. it just deletes a few words and phrases in between.
it is not a strong example of paraphrasing. it just rearranges the original words in a new order.

It is a strong example of paraphrasing. It successfully rephrases the main idea in a new way.

It is a strong example of paraphrasing. It successfully rephrases the main idea in a new way.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.