Correct the misplaced or dangling modifier? the woman tripped on the curb looking at the man.

The woman tripped on the curb while looking at the man.

“while” shows that it is the woman who did it, and that she did two actions.

Without this word, “curb looking at the man” could be misinterpreted. The curb could not possibly look at the man as it is not a living being and does not have eyes.

d.) then bernice winced as marjorie tossed her own hair over her shoulders and began to twist it slowly into two long blond braids until in her cream-colored negligée she looked like a delicate painting of some saxon princess. fascinated, bernice watched the braids grow. heavy and luxurious they were, moving under the supple fingers like restive snakes—and to bernice remained this relic and the curling iron and a to-morrow full of eyes.

the answer is mary made mudpies on monday.

remember alliteration is the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words.