English, 30.11.2019 19:31, chanahvanya

You will revise one body paragraph from your compare and contrast article. you will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.

view the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. this is your guide to a super submission.

review your informational article. choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document.
review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
review your paragraph for correct english language conventions. correct any errors.
write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
you will submit:

the original draft of your body paragraph
the revised draft of the same paragraph
a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing
save your work to your computer or drive.
submit your work in 02.10 kick it up a notch.

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